Warning — navel gazing ahead.
I’ve noticed that all my recent posts have included a photo. Today will be different.
I am a visual person and because my writing is a little lacking (OK a lot!), the inclusion of photo is my crutch. During my usual dish-washing brainstorming session last night, I got to thinking about why this is. The short answer is that I don’t understand who my audience is or what they want. More importantly, I often confused about what I want to give them. Starting without an end in mind?
I sort of ramble in my writing, one minute composing it as if it were a journal and the next moment I write as if I was addressing you the reader. So I’ve come up with three tips (more like challenges) for myself to improve my writing here.
- Write with an audience in mind. If you don’t have a audience in mind when you start writing, make one up. Think of specific people, use friends, co-workers, relatives or plain strangers and make them specific. The tone and cadence of your writing will change depending on if you are addressing your friend’s five year old or the boss. Each topic has the appropriate audience. Look for them and keep on track.
- Describe the scene to give the reader a sense of place. When I write I usually sit at a Stickley deck. It is new but modeled after those big old desks you used to see in banks. It has a knee-hole between two sets of drawers and Boykan, my Chocolate Lab, likes to curl up there to keep us warm. To my right is a computer mouse, my coffee cup and a ceramic vase full of pens, pencils, a staple puller, and scissors. To the left there is a reading lamp, a stack of books I’m reading, my iPod and a hipsterPDA card bleacher with cards for future blog posts and notes on a yoga asana. I use an old laptop for my main computer and the short monitor allows me to look over the top of the laptop and see the shop and woods beyond to the west. We feed the local pheasant and quail so sometimes they gather in the edge of the field jockeying for position and scratching up the ground looking for the last of the birdseed.
- Remain focused within a blog post. New idea equals new post. So often I will start with one idea and add one or two more so I can get volume. This isn’t necessary. If an idea can be expressed quickly there is no need to fatten it up. Here is were we can get into trouble though. If the idea is no fully expressed or is foggy in some way, fattening it with unrelated ideas only serves to confused the reader. It also doesn’t fell satisfying to the writer. This skill only comes with practice.
Well they you go, dear reader. There tips, seeds of which sprouted in last night’s dish-washing water. This is the work I need to do. Practice.
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